[原创]登华山
<P> </P><FONT face=宋体 size=5><P>国庆节到西安旅游,携家小登华山五峰,归来后赋诗一首,供大家指正。</P><P style="TEXT-JUSTIFY: inter-ideograph; MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LAYOUT-GRID-MODE: char; TEXT-INDENT: 24pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; TEXT-ALIGN: justify; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-layout-grid-align: none"><FONT face=宋体 size=3> <FONT size=5>登华山</FONT></FONT></P><P style="TEXT-JUSTIFY: inter-ideograph; MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LAYOUT-GRID-MODE: char; TEXT-INDENT: 24pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; TEXT-ALIGN: justify; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-layout-grid-align: none"><FONT face=宋体 size=5>西岳千仞五云间,</FONT></P><P style="TEXT-JUSTIFY: inter-ideograph; MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LAYOUT-GRID-MODE: char; TEXT-INDENT: 24pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; TEXT-ALIGN: justify; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-layout-grid-align: none"><FONT face=宋体 size=5>扶栏攀索未细看。</FONT></P><P style="TEXT-JUSTIFY: inter-ideograph; MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LAYOUT-GRID-MODE: char; TEXT-INDENT: 24pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; TEXT-ALIGN: justify; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-layout-grid-align: none"><FONT face=宋体 size=5>险峻从来生奇木,</FONT></P><P style="TEXT-JUSTIFY: inter-ideograph; MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LAYOUT-GRID-MODE: char; TEXT-INDENT: 24pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; TEXT-ALIGN: justify; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-layout-grid-align: none"><FONT face=宋体 size=5>嵯峨随处遗圣贤。</FONT></P><P style="TEXT-JUSTIFY: inter-ideograph; MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LAYOUT-GRID-MODE: char; TEXT-INDENT: 24pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; TEXT-ALIGN: justify; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-layout-grid-align: none"><FONT face=宋体 size=5>韩子投书应无路,</FONT></P><P style="TEXT-JUSTIFY: inter-ideograph; MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LAYOUT-GRID-MODE: char; TEXT-INDENT: 24pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; TEXT-ALIGN: justify; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-layout-grid-align: none"><FONT face=宋体 size=5>长空栈道有余缆。</FONT></P><P style="TEXT-JUSTIFY: inter-ideograph; MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LAYOUT-GRID-MODE: char; TEXT-INDENT: 24pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; TEXT-ALIGN: justify; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-layout-grid-align: none"><FONT face=宋体 size=5>堪叹功夫铁肩瘦,</FONT></P><P style="TEXT-JUSTIFY: inter-ideograph; MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LAYOUT-GRID-MODE: char; TEXT-INDENT: 24pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; TEXT-ALIGN: justify; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-layout-grid-align: none"><FONT face=宋体 size=5>筑得楼阁供神仙。</FONT></P><P style="TEXT-JUSTIFY: inter-ideograph; MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LAYOUT-GRID-MODE: char; TEXT-INDENT: 24pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; TEXT-ALIGN: justify; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-layout-grid-align: none"> </P></FONT><P style="TEXT-JUSTIFY: inter-ideograph; MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LAYOUT-GRID-MODE: char; TEXT-INDENT: 24pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; TEXT-ALIGN: justify; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-layout-grid-align: none"> </P><P style="TEXT-JUSTIFY: inter-ideograph; MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LAYOUT-GRID-MODE: char; TEXT-INDENT: 24pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; TEXT-ALIGN: justify; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-layout-grid-align: none"> </P><P style="TEXT-JUSTIFY: inter-ideograph; MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LAYOUT-GRID-MODE: char; TEXT-INDENT: 24pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; TEXT-ALIGN: justify; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-layout-grid-align: none"><FONT size=5></FONT> </P><P style="TEXT-JUSTIFY: inter-ideograph; MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LAYOUT-GRID-MODE: char; TEXT-INDENT: 24pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; TEXT-ALIGN: justify; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-layout-grid-align: none"><FONT face=宋体 size=3></FONT> </P><P> </P><BR><BR>[此帖子已被 生鱼儿 在 2008-11-27 22:30:56 编辑过]<br><br>[此帖子已被 生鱼儿 在 2008-11-28 10:12:12 编辑过] 图片贴不上,怎么回事?<br> 生鱼儿好久不见!一年不鸣,一鸣惊人。好诗! <FONT color=#dd226d size=5>好一首攀登华山的七言诗。有机会去登五峰定要体验一下:“西岳千仞五云间,。。。。。<BR>对于图片贴不上去,你可用photoshop将图片像素变小再贴。</FONT><BR> <BR><IMG src="/attachments/Upfiles/2008122181054522.jpg"><BR><BR> 华山怪险的,有机会也去玩玩。 登华山西岳千仞五云间,扶栏攀索未细看。险峻从来生奇木,嵯峨随处遗圣贤。韩子投书应无路,长空栈道有余缆。堪叹功夫铁肩瘦,筑得楼阁供神仙。 http://bbs.china-ws.org/attachments/Upfiles/2008122181054522.jpg 原帖由 生鱼儿 于 2008-12-2 18:12 发表 http://bbs.china-ws.org/images/common/back.gif华山山势峻峭,壁立千仞,群峰挺秀,以险称雄于五岳之首,自古以来就有"华山天下险"、"奇险天下第一山"之说,这里应该是千丈崖吧?十几年前登过华山,登上千丈崖有一惊心石,接下来是百尺峡,应该是通北峰之路吧,至今记忆犹新。
欣赏你的好诗!
堪叹功夫铁肩瘦,
筑得楼阁供神仙。
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:victory: :call: :@ 生鱼儿攀登华山 好诗!:victory: :victory: :victory: :victory: :victory: :victory: :victory: :victory: 久想去华山,只因她峻险。西岳名胜景,待你去登攀!
回复 8# 侯哥 的帖子
很感谢侯哥将这个贴子又找出来见光。去年登华山由于跟旅游团,看的匆忙,所谓“扶栏攀索未细看”,但奇木突兀峭壁,古代贤人的遗迹随处可见,“险峻从来生奇木,嵯峨随处遗圣贤”,使人震撼。韩愈投书处,还有遗迹,那时候没有现在这样的台阶、护拦,足可想想千年前爬华山有多险。长空栈道虽然险,但有缆绳保护,所谓“韩子投书应无路,长空栈道有余缆”。还有那些又黑又瘦的挑夫挑着一百多斤的建材及食物等向山顶登,很感叹。所以“堪叹功夫铁肩瘦,筑得楼阁供神仙”。 12 :victory: :@ 天下名山众,华山她险峻。名山各千秋,惟此多神韵!
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