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发表于 2014-10-4 18:17
美酒燒雞賞國粹
青島啤酒惹人醉
微山湖上鴨蛋青
聆聽隊長西行經
——-《隊長贊7·泳醉不醒》
houzhaotian
发表于 2014-10-4 18:18
穿越無人區
跨過死亡谷
暢遊黑馬河
青龍白虎舞
——《隊長贊8·泳醉不醒》
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发表于 2014-10-4 18:22
听雨不知道这一场雨后多少落花凋零或许光阴也随雨而流去过往终是回不去的曾经昨天的风景已逝今天还会艳花再生明天也许电闪雷鸣随后大雨凌空听落雨声雨会再现片片的秋红嗅一缕花儿的馨香春花秋月年年生成等你的是秋风
(谢谢侯老师指教)
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houzhaotian
发表于 2014-10-4 18:23
拜讀了老師的詩篇使我久久不能平靜
沒有文化修養·底蘊沒有生活經歷·體驗沒有自然審視·觀察沒有宇宙觀念·積澱
寫不出這樣簡練·深遠生動·感人發自肺腑的詩篇
忘記過去不會忘記…… 牽心掛肚的回憶《經風雨·見世面》《深挖洞·廣積糧》——到大風大浪里去鍛煉……廣闊的天地大有作為
從《麥克馬紅線》中印邊界反擊戰到《抗美援越》………… 《西沙之戰》到《珍寶島》中蘇邊界的槍林彈雨
…… …… ……
青春·鮮血·化作滿山杜鵑花遍野金達萊耋耄之年·有幸看到·聽見·嗅得……淅瀝的《小雨》還有從天而降的《冰雹》
——《答友人·觀“聽雨”有感·泳醉不醒》