大练兵 发表于 2007-4-12 10:09

春语

<P style="MARGIN-TOP: 0px; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0px; TEXT-INDENT: 30px; LINE-HEIGHT: 140%"><FONT face=华文新魏 color=#2bd54d size=5>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 春语</FONT></P><P style="MARGIN-TOP: 0px; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0px; TEXT-INDENT: 30px; LINE-HEIGHT: 140%"><FONT face=华文新魏 color=#2bd54d size=4>春夜临风心空明，</FONT></P><P style="MARGIN-TOP: 0px; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0px; TEXT-INDENT: 30px; LINE-HEIGHT: 140%"><FONT face=华文新魏 color=#2bd54d size=4>芽抽新蕊入帘青。</FONT></P><P style="MARGIN-TOP: 0px; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0px; TEXT-INDENT: 30px; LINE-HEIGHT: 140%"><FONT face=华文新魏 color=#2bd54d size=4>月涂彩晕倏见云，</FONT></P><P style="MARGIN-TOP: 0px; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0px; TEXT-INDENT: 30px; LINE-HEIGHT: 140%"><FONT face=华文新魏 color=#2bd54d size=4>雨舞三更天又晴。</FONT></P><P style="MARGIN-TOP: 0px; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0px; TEXT-INDENT: 30px; LINE-HEIGHT: 140%"><FONT face=华文新魏 color=#2bd54d size=4>有心相守寸草意，</FONT></P><P style="MARGIN-TOP: 0px; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0px; TEXT-INDENT: 30px; LINE-HEIGHT: 140%"><FONT face=华文新魏 color=#2bd54d size=4>游弋红尘踏歌行。</FONT></P><P style="MARGIN-TOP: 0px; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0px; TEXT-INDENT: 30px; LINE-HEIGHT: 140%"><FONT face=华文新魏 color=#2bd54d size=4>喜嗔嗟瞒心上语，</FONT></P><P style="MARGIN-TOP: 0px; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0px; TEXT-INDENT: 30px; LINE-HEIGHT: 140%"><FONT face=华文新魏 color=#2bd54d size=4>愿凝冰心付真情。</FONT></P>

云水林海 发表于 2007-4-12 10:25

原文由 大练兵 发表: <br><P style="MARGIN-TOP: 0px; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0px; TEXT-INDENT: 30px; LINE-HEIGHT: 140%"><FONT face=华文新魏 color=#2bd54d size=5>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 春语</FONT></P><P style="MARGIN-TOP: 0px; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0px; TEXT-INDENT: 30px; LINE-HEIGHT: 140%"><FONT face=华文新魏 color=#2bd54d size=4>春夜临风心空明，</FONT></P><P style="MARGIN-TOP: 0px; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0px; TEXT-INDENT: 30px; LINE-HEIGHT: 140%"><FONT face=华文新魏 color=#2bd54d size=4>芽抽新蕊入帘青。</FONT></P><P style="MARGIN-TOP: 0px; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0px; TEXT-INDENT: 30px; LINE-HEIGHT: 140%"><FONT face=华文新魏 color=#2bd54d size=4>月涂彩晕倏见云，</FONT></P><P style="MARGIN-TOP: 0px; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0px; TEXT-INDENT: 30px; LINE-HEIGHT: 140%"><FONT face=华文新魏 color=#2bd54d size=4>雨舞三更天又晴。</FONT></P><P style="MARGIN-TOP: 0px; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0px; TEXT-INDENT: 30px; LINE-HEIGHT: 140%"><FONT face=华文新魏 color=#2bd54d size=4>有心相守寸草意，</FONT></P><P style="MARGIN-TOP: 0px; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0px; TEXT-INDENT: 30px; LINE-HEIGHT: 140%"><FONT face=华文新魏 color=#2bd54d size=4>游弋红尘踏歌行。</FONT></P><P style="MARGIN-TOP: 0px; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0px; TEXT-INDENT: 30px; LINE-HEIGHT: 140%"><FONT face=华文新魏 color=#2bd54d size=4>喜嗔嗟瞒心上语，</FONT></P><P style="MARGIN-TOP: 0px; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0px; TEXT-INDENT: 30px; LINE-HEIGHT: 140%"><FONT face=华文新魏 color=#2bd54d size=4>愿凝冰心付真情。</FONT></P><P style="MARGIN-TOP: 0px; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0px; TEXT-INDENT: 30px; LINE-HEIGHT: 140%"><FONT face=华文新魏 color=#2bd54d size=4></FONT>&nbsp;</P><P style="MARGIN-TOP: 0px; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0px; TEXT-INDENT: 30px; LINE-HEIGHT: 140%"><FONT face=华文新魏 color=#d52bd5 size=5>很好的春语，悠然的意境，飘逸的心灵！欣赏了！</FONT></P>

大度英雄 发表于 2007-4-12 10:35

<P><FONT face=华文新魏 color=#0000ff size=6>好有意境的春语,学习了.</FONT></P>

紫衣の罗兰 发表于 2007-4-12 10:48

原文由 云水林海 发表: 原文由 大练兵 发表: <BR><P style="MARGIN-TOP: 0px; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0px; TEXT-INDENT: 30px; LINE-HEIGHT: 140%"><FONT face=华文新魏 color=#2bd54d size=5>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 春语</FONT></P><P style="MARGIN-TOP: 0px; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0px; TEXT-INDENT: 30px; LINE-HEIGHT: 140%"><FONT face=华文新魏 color=#2bd54d size=4>春夜临风心空明，</FONT></P><P style="MARGIN-TOP: 0px; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0px; TEXT-INDENT: 30px; LINE-HEIGHT: 140%"><FONT face=华文新魏 color=#2bd54d size=4>芽抽新蕊入帘青。</FONT></P><P style="MARGIN-TOP: 0px; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0px; TEXT-INDENT: 30px; LINE-HEIGHT: 140%"><FONT face=华文新魏 color=#2bd54d size=4>月涂彩晕倏见云，</FONT></P><P style="MARGIN-TOP: 0px; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0px; TEXT-INDENT: 30px; LINE-HEIGHT: 140%"><FONT face=华文新魏 color=#2bd54d size=4>雨舞三更天又晴。</FONT></P><P style="MARGIN-TOP: 0px; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0px; TEXT-INDENT: 30px; LINE-HEIGHT: 140%"><FONT face=华文新魏 color=#2bd54d size=4>有心相守寸草意，</FONT></P><P style="MARGIN-TOP: 0px; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0px; TEXT-INDENT: 30px; LINE-HEIGHT: 140%"><FONT face=华文新魏 color=#2bd54d size=4>游弋红尘踏歌行。</FONT></P><P style="MARGIN-TOP: 0px; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0px; TEXT-INDENT: 30px; LINE-HEIGHT: 140%"><FONT face=华文新魏 color=#2bd54d size=4>喜嗔嗟瞒心上语，</FONT></P><P style="MARGIN-TOP: 0px; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0px; TEXT-INDENT: 30px; LINE-HEIGHT: 140%"><FONT face=华文新魏 color=#2bd54d size=4>愿凝冰心付真情。</FONT></P><P style="MARGIN-TOP: 0px; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0px; TEXT-INDENT: 30px; LINE-HEIGHT: 140%"><FONT face=华文新魏 color=#2bd54d size=4></FONT>&nbsp;</P><P style="MARGIN-TOP: 0px; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0px; TEXT-INDENT: 30px; LINE-HEIGHT: 140%"><FONT face=华文新魏 color=#d52bd5 size=5>很好的春语，悠然的意境，飘逸的心灵！欣赏了！</FONT></P>

云水林海 发表于 2007-4-13 16:46

<FONT face=华文新魏 color=#2bd54d size=5>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 春语</FONT><P style="MARGIN-TOP: 0px; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0px; TEXT-INDENT: 30px; LINE-HEIGHT: 140%"><FONT face=华文新魏 color=#2bd54d size=4>春夜临风心空明，</FONT></P><P style="MARGIN-TOP: 0px; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0px; TEXT-INDENT: 30px; LINE-HEIGHT: 140%"><FONT face=华文新魏 color=#2bd54d size=4>芽抽新蕊入帘青。</FONT></P><P style="MARGIN-TOP: 0px; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0px; TEXT-INDENT: 30px; LINE-HEIGHT: 140%"><FONT face=华文新魏 color=#2bd54d size=4>月涂彩晕倏见云，</FONT></P><P style="MARGIN-TOP: 0px; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0px; TEXT-INDENT: 30px; LINE-HEIGHT: 140%"><FONT face=华文新魏 color=#2bd54d size=4>雨舞三更天又晴。</FONT></P><P style="MARGIN-TOP: 0px; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0px; TEXT-INDENT: 30px; LINE-HEIGHT: 140%"><FONT face=华文新魏 color=#2bd54d size=4>有心相守寸草意，</FONT></P><P style="MARGIN-TOP: 0px; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0px; TEXT-INDENT: 30px; LINE-HEIGHT: 140%"><FONT face=华文新魏 color=#2bd54d size=4>游弋红尘踏歌行。</FONT></P><P style="MARGIN-TOP: 0px; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0px; TEXT-INDENT: 30px; LINE-HEIGHT: 140%"><FONT face=华文新魏 color=#2bd54d size=4>喜嗔嗟瞒心上语，</FONT></P><P style="MARGIN-TOP: 0px; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0px; TEXT-INDENT: 30px; LINE-HEIGHT: 140%"><FONT face=华文新魏 color=#2bd54d size=4>愿凝冰心付真情。</FONT></P><P style="MARGIN-TOP: 0px; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0px; TEXT-INDENT: 30px; LINE-HEIGHT: 140%"><FONT face=华文新魏 color=#2bd54d size=4></FONT>&nbsp;</P><P style="MARGIN-TOP: 0px; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0px; TEXT-INDENT: 30px; LINE-HEIGHT: 140%"><FONT face="" color=#2248dd size=5>大练兵朋友,再次欣赏,感觉很好,若按你整篇诗文的意境,</FONT></P><P style="MARGIN-TOP: 0px; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0px; TEXT-INDENT: 30px; LINE-HEIGHT: 140%"><FONT face="" color=#2248dd size=5></FONT>&nbsp;</P><P style="MARGIN-TOP: 0px; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0px; TEXT-INDENT: 30px; LINE-HEIGHT: 140%"><FONT face="" color=#2248dd size=5>将"有心相守寸草意,游弋红晨踏歌行"两句改为"有心相守</FONT></P><P style="MARGIN-TOP: 0px; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0px; TEXT-INDENT: 30px; LINE-HEIGHT: 140%"><FONT face="" color=#2248dd size=5></FONT>&nbsp;</P><P style="MARGIN-TOP: 0px; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0px; TEXT-INDENT: 30px; LINE-HEIGHT: 140%"><FONT face="" color=#2248dd size=5>寸草晖,无意红尘踏歌行"是否更好一些!</FONT></P><P style="MARGIN-TOP: 0px; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0px; TEXT-INDENT: 30px; LINE-HEIGHT: 140%"><FONT color=#2248dd size=5></FONT>&nbsp;</P><P style="MARGIN-TOP: 0px; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0px; TEXT-INDENT: 30px; LINE-HEIGHT: 140%">&nbsp;</P><BR>

冬泳后勤 发表于 2007-4-13 20:02

<FONT color=#dd22b8 size=6>你发的帖子文字重叠的厉害，不知道是怎么回事？</FONT>

深海精灵 发表于 2007-4-13 20:15

<FONT color=#f709f7 size=6><STRONG>拜读了!欣赏了!</STRONG></FONT>

紫衣の罗兰 发表于 2007-4-14 08:45

<P>原文由 冬泳后勤 发表: <FONT color=#dd22b8 size=6>你发的帖子文字重叠的厉害，不知道是怎么回事？</FONT> </P><P>&nbsp;</P><P><FONT color=#c709f7 size=5>可能是颜色（字体）的问题，字号也小了点</FONT></P>

治痒秘方挠挠 发表于 2007-4-14 09:18

大练兵的词赋非常高雅，学习了！
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