[原创]冬泳小曲－－－敬请朋友们指正
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 15.6pt 0cm; WORD-BREAK: break-all; TEXT-INDENT: 36pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-para-margin-top: 1.0gd; mso-para-margin-right: 0cm; mso-para-margin-bottom: 1.0gd; mso-para-margin-left: 0cm; mso-char-indent-count: 1.0; mso-line-height-alt: 26.0pt; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" align=center><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 36pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 华文新魏; mso-bidi-font-size: 14.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt">冬泳小曲<SPAN lang=EN-US><?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" /><o:p></o:p></SPAN></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 15.6pt 0cm; TEXT-INDENT: 24pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 26pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-para-margin-top: 1.0gd; mso-para-margin-right: 0cm; mso-para-margin-bottom: 1.0gd; mso-para-margin-left: 0cm; mso-char-indent-count: 1.5; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" align=center><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: #ee1111; FONT-FAMILY: 华文新魏; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; 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COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 华文新魏; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt">铿锵的音符唱起健康的你和我<SPAN lang=EN-US>;<o:p></o:p></SPAN></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 15.6pt 0cm; TEXT-INDENT: 27pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 26pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-para-margin-top: 1.0gd; mso-para-margin-right: 0cm; mso-para-margin-bottom: 1.0gd; mso-para-margin-left: 0cm; mso-char-indent-count: 1.5; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" align=center><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 华文新魏; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 0pt">挫败严寒，战胜风雨<SPAN lang=EN-US><o:p></o:p></SPAN></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 15.6pt 0cm; TEXT-INDENT: 27pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 26pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-para-margin-top: 1.0gd; mso-para-margin-right: 0cm; mso-para-margin-bottom: 1.0gd; mso-para-margin-left: 0cm; mso-char-indent-count: 1.5; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" align=center><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 华文新魏; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt">大海江河留下了我们的足迹<SPAN lang=EN-US><o:p></o:p></SPAN></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 15.6pt 0cm; TEXT-INDENT: 27pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 26pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-para-margin-top: 1.0gd; mso-para-margin-right: 0cm; mso-para-margin-bottom: 1.0gd; mso-para-margin-left: 0cm; mso-char-indent-count: 1.5; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" align=center><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 华文新魏; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt">冬泳朋友<SPAN lang=EN-US><SPAN style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </SPAN></SPAN>坚强起来<SPAN lang=EN-US><o:p></o:p></SPAN></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 15.6pt 0cm; TEXT-INDENT: 27pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 26pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-para-margin-top: 1.0gd; mso-para-margin-right: 0cm; mso-para-margin-bottom: 1.0gd; mso-para-margin-left: 0cm; mso-char-indent-count: 1.5; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" align=center><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 华文新魏; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt">用我们的意志换取美好的生活</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt"><o:p></o:p></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 15.6pt 0cm; TEXT-INDENT: 27pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 26pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-para-margin-top: 1.0gd; mso-para-margin-right: 0cm; mso-para-margin-bottom: 1.0gd; mso-para-margin-left: 0cm; mso-char-indent-count: 1.5; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" align=center><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 华文新魏; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt">从容感知丰硕生活的岁月年华<SPAN lang=EN-US><o:p></o:p></SPAN></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 15.6pt 0cm; TEXT-INDENT: 27pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 26pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-para-margin-top: 1.0gd; mso-para-margin-right: 0cm; mso-para-margin-bottom: 1.0gd; mso-para-margin-left: 0cm; mso-char-indent-count: 1.5; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" align=center><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; 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COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 华文新魏; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt">焕发冬泳人更爱生活<SPAN lang=EN-US><o:p></o:p></SPAN></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 15.6pt 0cm; TEXT-INDENT: 27pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 26pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-para-margin-top: 1.0gd; mso-para-margin-right: 0cm; mso-para-margin-bottom: 1.0gd; mso-para-margin-left: 0cm; mso-char-indent-count: 1.5; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" align=center><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 华文新魏; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt">在冬季里我们笑傲严寒<SPAN lang=EN-US><o:p></o:p></SPAN></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 15.6pt 0cm; TEXT-INDENT: 27pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 26pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-para-margin-top: 1.0gd; mso-para-margin-right: 0cm; mso-para-margin-bottom: 1.0gd; mso-para-margin-left: 0cm; mso-char-indent-count: 1.5; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" align=center><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 华文新魏; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt">在夏季里我们踏浪逐波<SPAN lang=EN-US><o:p></o:p></SPAN></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 15.6pt 0cm; TEXT-INDENT: 27pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 26pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-para-margin-top: 1.0gd; mso-para-margin-right: 0cm; mso-para-margin-bottom: 1.0gd; mso-para-margin-left: 0cm; mso-char-indent-count: 1.5; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" align=center><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 华文新魏; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt">冬泳朋友<SPAN lang=EN-US><SPAN style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </SPAN></SPAN>坚强起来<SPAN lang=EN-US><o:p></o:p></SPAN></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 15.6pt 0cm; TEXT-INDENT: 27pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 26pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-para-margin-top: 1.0gd; mso-para-margin-right: 0cm; mso-para-margin-bottom: 1.0gd; mso-para-margin-left: 0cm; mso-char-indent-count: 1.5; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" align=center><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 华文新魏; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt">崔不跨的意志和坚强<SPAN lang=EN-US><o:p></o:p></SPAN></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 15.6pt 0cm; TEXT-INDENT: 27pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 26pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-para-margin-top: 1.0gd; mso-para-margin-right: 0cm; mso-para-margin-bottom: 1.0gd; mso-para-margin-left: 0cm; mso-char-indent-count: 1.5; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" align=center><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 华文新魏; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt">磨练和陶冶了人生情操 健康和快乐<SPAN lang=EN-US><o:p></o:p></SPAN></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 15.6pt 0cm; TEXT-INDENT: 27pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 26pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-para-margin-top: 1.0gd; mso-para-margin-right: 0cm; mso-para-margin-bottom: 1.0gd; mso-para-margin-left: 0cm; mso-char-indent-count: 1.5; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" align=center><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: #e61a1a; FONT-FAMILY: 华文新魏; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; 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COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 华文新魏; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-font-kerning: 0pt"><BR><SPAN style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </SPAN></SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 华文新魏; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-font-kerning: 0pt">在这个花海的世界里<SPAN lang=EN-US><o:p></o:p></SPAN></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 15.6pt 0cm; TEXT-INDENT: 27pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 26pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-para-margin-top: 1.0gd; mso-para-margin-right: 0cm; mso-para-margin-bottom: 1.0gd; mso-para-margin-left: 0cm; mso-char-indent-count: 1.5; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" align=center><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 华文新魏; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-font-kerning: 0pt">冬泳人的坚强拼搏<SPAN lang=EN-US><o:p></o:p></SPAN></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 15.6pt 0cm; TEXT-INDENT: 27pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 26pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-para-margin-top: 1.0gd; mso-para-margin-right: 0cm; mso-para-margin-bottom: 1.0gd; mso-para-margin-left: 0cm; mso-char-indent-count: 1.5; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" align=center><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 华文新魏; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-font-kerning: 0pt">已从万紫千红的传说中萌芽壮大<SPAN lang=EN-US><BR></SPAN>让我们一起在人生旅途上<SPAN lang=EN-US><BR></SPAN>响亮的唱起健康快乐的歌<SPAN lang=EN-US><o:p></o:p></SPAN></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center" align=center><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: blue"><o:p> </o:p></SPAN></P> <P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 15.6pt 0cm; TEXT-INDENT: 27pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 26pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-char-indent-count: 1.5; mso-para-margin-top: 1.0gd; mso-para-margin-right: 0cm; mso-para-margin-bottom: 1.0gd; mso-para-margin-left: 0cm; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" align=center><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 华文新魏; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt">铿锵的音符唱起健康的你和我<SPAN lang=EN-US>;</SPAN></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 15.6pt 0cm; TEXT-INDENT: 27pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 26pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-char-indent-count: 1.5; mso-para-margin-top: 1.0gd; mso-para-margin-right: 0cm; mso-para-margin-bottom: 1.0gd; mso-para-margin-left: 0cm; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" align=center><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 华文新魏; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt"><SPAN lang=EN-US><FONT color=#ff0033>楼主把歌词写的很好，就是不知是啥曲子？</FONT></SPAN></SPAN></P> 不错! 铿锵有力,激励人心! <FONT face=华文新魏 color=#0909f7 size=6> 谢谢大海的风帆带来的健康快乐的歌！<BR> 是一首冬泳小曲，一段人生彭湃的歌！</FONT> 原文由 暖暖夕阳 发表: <br><P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 15.6pt 0cm; TEXT-INDENT: 27pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 26pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-char-indent-count: 1.5; mso-para-margin-top: 1.0gd; mso-para-margin-right: 0cm; mso-para-margin-bottom: 1.0gd; mso-para-margin-left: 0cm; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" align=center><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 华文新魏; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt">铿锵的音符唱起健康的你和我<SPAN lang=EN-US>;</SPAN></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 15.6pt 0cm; TEXT-INDENT: 27pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 26pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-char-indent-count: 1.5; mso-para-margin-top: 1.0gd; mso-para-margin-right: 0cm; mso-para-margin-bottom: 1.0gd; mso-para-margin-left: 0cm; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" align=center><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 华文新魏; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt"><SPAN lang=EN-US><FONT color=#ff0033>楼主把歌词写的很好，就是不知是啥曲子？</FONT></SPAN></SPAN></P><P></P><P><FONT color=#ee1196 size=6>同感，歌词很好，哼不出来曲子？</FONT></P> 原文由 大度英雄 发表: <FONT face=华文新魏 color=#0909f7 size=6> 谢谢大海的风帆带来的健康快乐的歌！<BR> 是一首冬泳小曲，一段人生彭湃的歌！</FONT> 原文由 暖暖夕阳 发表: <br><P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 15.6pt 0cm; TEXT-INDENT: 27pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 26pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-para-margin-top: 1.0gd; mso-para-margin-right: 0cm; mso-para-margin-bottom: 1.0gd; mso-para-margin-left: 0cm; mso-char-indent-count: 1.5; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" align=center><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 华文新魏; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt">铿锵的音符唱起健康的你和我<SPAN lang=EN-US>;</SPAN></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 15.6pt 0cm; TEXT-INDENT: 27pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 26pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-para-margin-top: 1.0gd; mso-para-margin-right: 0cm; mso-para-margin-bottom: 1.0gd; mso-para-margin-left: 0cm; mso-char-indent-count: 1.5; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" align=center><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 华文新魏; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt"><SPAN lang=EN-US><FONT color=#ff0033>楼主把歌词写的很好，就是不知是啥曲子？</FONT></SPAN></SPAN></P><P align=center><FONT size=5>我也只是乱写，更不会什么曲子。见笑了！</FONT></P> <P align=center><FONT face=华文新魏 color=#cc33ae size=5>让我们一起在人生旅途上</FONT><SPAN lang=EN-US><BR></SPAN><FONT face=华文新魏 color=#cc33ae size=5>响亮的唱起健康快乐的歌</FONT></P><P align=center><FONT face=华文新魏 color=#cc33ae size=5>让我们共同谱写人生华章</FONT></P> <FONT color=#0000ff size=5>让我们一起在人生旅途上</FONT><SPAN lang=EN-US><BR></SPAN><FONT size=5><FONT color=#0000ff>响亮的唱起健康快乐的歌<SPAN lang=EN-US><?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" /><o:p></o:p></SPAN></FONT></FONT> <P><FONT size=5>风帆;</FONT></P><P><FONT size=5> 如果你写诗这样写已经很不错了,我和大家的意见一样,写的坚强有力.写出咱冬泳人意志和豪迈.如果你写歌曲的话还需要修改.</FONT></P><P><FONT size=5> 我也曾想过若大个冬泳网,全国这么多的冬泳人,咱们应该有咱们冬泳人的歌曲.咱冬泳网人才済济,能否号召大家创造一首咱自己的歌曲?</FONT> </P><P align=center> </P> 原文由 青年教师 发表: <br><P><FONT size=5>风帆;</FONT></P><P><FONT size=5> 如果你写诗这样写已经很不错了,我和大家的意见一样,写的坚强有力.写出咱冬泳人意志和豪迈.如果你写歌曲的话还需要修改.</FONT></P><P><FONT size=5> 我也曾想过若大个冬泳网,全国这么多的冬泳人,咱们应该有咱们冬泳人的歌曲.咱冬泳网人才済济,能否号召大家创造一首咱自己的歌曲?</FONT> </P><P align=center> </P><FONT color=#1a1ae6 size=6>谢谢您能这样诚恳的给我指点。我写的不是什么歌曲，更不是什么诗句。如果你能帮我修改成歌词或者一个擦边的诗句，我倒是感谢你。好不好青年老师。</FONT> <P><FONT size=5> 我也曾想过若大个冬泳网,全国这么多的冬泳人,咱们应该有咱们冬泳人的歌曲.咱冬泳网人才済济,能否号召大家创造一首咱自己的歌曲?</FONT> </P><P><STRONG><FONT color=#0000ff size=7> 大家快动手，跟着感觉走，我就不相信，没有一知音！</FONT></STRONG></P><P align=center> </P> <H1><FONT color=#e61a6b>学习了!</FONT></H1> <P align=center><FONT color=#333366 size=5><STRONG></STRONG></FONT> </P><P align=center><FONT color=#333366 size=5><STRONG>我因冬泳而豪迈，</STRONG></FONT></P><P align=center><FONT color=#333366 size=5><STRONG>一支小曲唱起来。</STRONG></FONT></P><P align=center><FONT color=#333366 size=5><STRONG>东南西北十八调，</STRONG></FONT></P><P align=center><FONT color=#333366 size=5><STRONG>上下左右韵自在。</STRONG></FONT></P> 原文由 大海的风帆 发表: 原文由 青年教师 发表: <BR><P><FONT size=5>风帆;</FONT></P><P><FONT size=5> 如果你写诗这样写已经很不错了,我和大家的意见一样,写的坚强有力.写出咱冬泳人意志和豪迈.如果你写歌曲的话还需要修改.</FONT></P><P><FONT size=5> 我也曾想过若大个冬泳网,全国这么多的冬泳人,咱们应该有咱们冬泳人的歌曲.咱冬泳网人才済济,能否号召大家创造一首咱自己的歌曲?</FONT> </P><P align=center> </P><P><FONT color=#1a1ae6 size=6>谢谢您能这样诚恳的给我指点。我写的不是什么歌曲，更不是什么诗句。如果你能帮我修改成歌词或者一个擦边的诗句，我倒是感谢你。好不好青年老师。</FONT></P><P><FONT color=#1a1ae6 size=6></FONT> </P><P><FONT color=#1a1ae6 size=6>我觉的还是不改的好,作为自由体诗,通俗易懂.大家也很喜欢,如果一改就失去他的风格了,显得不论不类.即便改好也只能做通俗歌曲的词用,话有些说重了,不知你能接受的了.</FONT></P><P><FONT color=#1a1ae6 size=6></FONT> </P><br><br>［此帖子已被 青年教师 在 2007-6-27 16:19:15 编辑过］ <FONT color=#007700 size=5>好帖不能沉！</FONT> <FONT color=#ee1196 size=6>意志坚定,铿锵有力.</FONT> <FONT color=#ee1196 size=6> 挑不出什么毛病，感觉就是好！</FONT>
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