大海的风帆 发表于 2007-10-5 23:26

雨滴

<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 36.05pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 33pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-char-indent-count: 1.5" align=center><SPAN class=postbody1><B><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 24pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 华文新魏; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt">雨<SPAN lang=EN-US><SPAN style="mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </SPAN></SPAN>滴</SPAN></B></SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 24pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 华文新魏; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt"><?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" /><o:p></o:p></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 24pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 33pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.5"><SPAN class=postbody1><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Times New Roman; mso-hansi-font-family: Times New Roman">清晨,乌云遍布天空,但没有下雨,也没有风,我骑车去了海边。</SPAN></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 24pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 33pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.5"><SPAN class=postbody1><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Times New Roman; mso-hansi-font-family: Times New Roman">就在我享受大海淋浴的时候,</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">毛毛细雨,悄悄无声无息地从天空飘落下来,就像是无数蚕娘吐出的银丝。千万条细丝,荡漾在半空中,迷迷漫漫的轻纱,披上了黑油油草坪上、披在世间万物生灵上。我静心去看那雨滴,</SPAN><SPAN class=postbody1><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Times New Roman; mso-hansi-font-family: Times New Roman">雨滴</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=postbody1><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: Times New Roman; mso-hansi-font-family: Times New Roman">象挥动翅膀的天使,把湿润带给土地,每当雨滴洒落在树枝上那一瞬间,仿佛雨滴忍着被分割的痛苦而发出呻吟声。但又仿佛看到雨滴在痛苦中又有所欣喜,因自己的破碎而重新焕发出新生命的小雨滴分撒在树的每一片叶子上;在滋润树叶之后,把剩余的全部喷洒在草坪上,被大地深深的收藏。雨滴,她无怨无悔的把自己细微的一点都无私的渗透进大地,滋润着土地里的生命。</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=postbody1><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: red; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt"><o:p></o:p></SPAN></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 24pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 33pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.5"><SPAN class=postbody1><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: Times New Roman; mso-hansi-font-family: Times New Roman">今年这是第三次了吧?记得不是很清楚。但是我喜欢在雨季看大海,我喜爱看雨滴坠落似大海的情景。每每看到雨滴滴落大海的时候,雨滴有千万种。梅花瓣状、金珠状,更像</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">千万个伞兵,从空中跳下来,安全地降落在地面上</SPAN><SPAN class=postbody1><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Times New Roman; mso-hansi-font-family: Times New Roman">,也像</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">夜间星辰磷光捕鱼的大网,</SPAN><SPAN class=postbody1><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: Times New Roman; mso-hansi-font-family: Times New Roman">在触及浪花的那一瞬间,雨滴变成泡沫,带着一颗善良的心融入那翻腾的浪花中去,温柔和善的与浪花弹奏出优美的琴玄管合奏乐曲,与浪花一起吟唱欢乐歌声。雨滴是坠落的天使,是天上赐予人间万福,虽然雨滴很小,可她无私、全部的奉献,而我们每一个人</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=postbody1><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: red; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt">.......</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: red; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt"><o:p></o:p></SPAN></P>

大海的风帆 发表于 2007-10-6 09:49

<P align=center><FONT size=6>耻笑、耻笑,实不敢当。</FONT></P><P align=center><FONT size=6>只是乱写,葫芦画瓢。</FONT></P>

大度英雄 发表于 2007-10-6 11:10

原文由 启明 发表: 毛毛细雨中享受大海、老天的淋浴, <FONT face=华文新魏 color=#0000ff size=6>写的有诗意!</FONT>

米奇妙 发表于 2007-10-6 11:18

<FONT size=5>借景生情,描写细腻,文笔精湛。赋有诗意。</FONT>

阿庆嫂 发表于 2007-10-6 10:03

原文由 寒江搏浪 发表: <br><P><FONT color=#ff0000><FONT face=宋体><FONT size=5>我静心去看那雨滴,</FONT><SPAN class=postbody1><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: " Roman?? New ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; Times>雨滴</SPAN></SPAN></FONT></FONT><SPAN class=postbody1><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: " Roman?? New ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; Times>象挥动翅膀的天使,把湿润带给土地,每当雨滴洒落在树枝上那一瞬间,仿佛雨滴忍着被分割的痛苦而发出呻吟声。但又仿佛看到雨滴在痛苦中又有所欣喜,因自己的破碎而重新焕发出新生命的小雨滴分撒在树的每一片叶子上;... ...</SPAN></SPAN></P><P><SPAN class=postbody1><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: " Roman?? New ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; Times><FONT face=华文新魏 color=#0066ff size=6>观察细腻 ,文笔精湛 ,描写透彻 ,拟人传神 .</FONT></SPAN></SPAN></P><P><SPAN class=postbody1><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: " Roman?? New ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; Times><FONT face=华文新魏 color=#0066ff size=6>太有才了!!!</FONT></SPAN></SPAN></P>

畅游大海 发表于 2007-10-6 07:53

<P><SPAN class=postbody1><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: " Roman?? New ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; Times><FONT face=华文新魏 color=#cc3333 size=6>帆斑竹你太有才了!!</FONT></SPAN></SPAN></P>

阿庆嫂 发表于 2007-10-6 10:07

原文由 一天到晚游泳的鱼 发表: <br><P align=center><SPAN class=postbody1><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: " Roman?? New ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; Times><FONT face=华文新魏 color=#0066ff size=6></FONT></SPAN></SPAN>&nbsp;</P><P align=center><SPAN class=postbody1><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: " Roman?? New ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; Times><FONT face=华文新魏 color=#0066ff size=6>观察细腻 ,文笔精湛 ,描写透彻 ,拟人传神 .</FONT></SPAN></SPAN></P><P align=center><SPAN class=postbody1><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: " Roman?? New ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; Times><FONT face=华文新魏 color=#0066ff size=6>太有才了!</FONT></SPAN></SPAN></P><P align=center><SPAN class=postbody1><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: " Roman?? New ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; Times><FONT face=华文新魏 color=#0066ff size=6></FONT></SPAN></SPAN>&nbsp;</P><P align=center><SPAN class=postbody1><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: " Roman?? New ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; Times><FONT face=华文新魏 color=#0066ff size=6></FONT></SPAN></SPAN>&nbsp;</P>看着美文,眼前仿佛出现了一幕雨景,特别美的雨景!</BIG></FONT><IMG src="http://www.china-ws.org/BBS/Htmleditor/regular_smile.gif">

启明 发表于 2007-10-6 09:28

毛毛细雨中享受大海、老天的淋浴,

寒江搏浪 发表于 2007-10-6 07:25

<P><FONT color=#ff0000><FONT face=宋体><FONT size=5>我静心去看那雨滴,</FONT><SPAN class=postbody1><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: " mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?? New ?Times Roman?; Times>雨滴</SPAN></SPAN></FONT></FONT><SPAN class=postbody1><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: " mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?? New ?Times Roman?; Times>象挥动翅膀的天使,把湿润带给土地,每当雨滴洒落在树枝上那一瞬间,仿佛雨滴忍着被分割的痛苦而发出呻吟声。但又仿佛看到雨滴在痛苦中又有所欣喜,因自己的破碎而重新焕发出新生命的小雨滴分撒在树的每一片叶子上;... ...</SPAN></SPAN></P><P><SPAN class=postbody1><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: " mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?? New ?Times Roman?; Times><FONT face=华文新魏 color=#0066ff size=6>观察细腻 ,文笔精湛 ,描写透彻 ,拟人传神 .</FONT></SPAN></SPAN></P><P><SPAN class=postbody1><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: " mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?? New ?Times Roman?; Times><FONT face=华文新魏 color=#0066ff size=6>太有才了!!!</FONT></SPAN></SPAN></P>

暴雨骄阳 发表于 2007-10-6 19:53

<FONT size=5>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 下雨游泳的感觉的真好,雨搭载身上象针刺样的痛快。斑竹文笔细腻,如果不认识我以为是女士</FONT>

溜溜的涛 发表于 2007-10-6 18:57

原文由 寒江搏浪 发表: <br><P><FONT color=#ff0000><FONT face=宋体><FONT size=5>我静心去看那雨滴,</FONT><SPAN class=postbody1><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: " Roman?? New ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; Times>雨滴</SPAN></SPAN></FONT></FONT><SPAN class=postbody1><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: " Roman?? New ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; Times>象挥动翅膀的天使,把湿润带给土地,每当雨滴洒落在树枝上那一瞬间,仿佛雨滴忍着被分割的痛苦而发出呻吟声。但又仿佛看到雨滴在痛苦中又有所欣喜,因自己的破碎而重新焕发出新生命的小雨滴分撒在树的每一片叶子上;... ...</SPAN></SPAN></P><P><SPAN class=postbody1><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: " Roman?? New ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; Times><FONT face=华文新魏 color=#0066ff size=6>观察细腻 ,文笔精湛 ,描写透彻 ,拟人传神 .</FONT></SPAN></SPAN></P><P><SPAN class=postbody1><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: " Roman?? New ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; Times><FONT face=华文新魏 color=#0066ff size=6>太有才了!!!</FONT></SPAN></SPAN></P>

北飞燕子 发表于 2007-10-6 19:57

<FONT color=#ff0000><FONT face=宋体 size=5>雨滴是坠落的天使,是天上赐予人间万福,虽然雨滴很小,可她无私、全部的奉献,而我们每一个人</FONT><SPAN class=postbody1><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: red; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt">.......平凡的景平凡的物用不平凡的心态去面对,世事就会变的尤为美好!</SPAN></SPAN></FONT>

远望一号 发表于 2007-10-6 19:05

原文由 溜溜的涛 发表: 原文由 寒江搏浪 发表: <BR><P><FONT color=#ff0000><FONT face=宋体><FONT size=5>我静心去看那雨滴,</FONT><SPAN class=postbody1><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: " Roman?; New ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Times Roman??>雨滴</SPAN></SPAN></FONT></FONT><SPAN class=postbody1><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: " Roman?; New ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Times Roman??>象挥动翅膀的天使,把湿润带给土地,每当雨滴洒落在树枝上那一瞬间,仿佛雨滴忍着被分割的痛苦而发出呻吟声。但又仿佛看到雨滴在痛苦中又有所欣喜,因自己的破碎而重新焕发出新生命的小雨滴分撒在树的每一片叶子上;... ...</SPAN></SPAN></P><P><SPAN class=postbody1><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: " Roman?; New ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Times Roman??><FONT face=华文新魏 color=#0066ff size=6>观察细腻 ,文笔精湛 ,描写透彻 ,拟人传神 .</FONT></SPAN></SPAN></P><P><SPAN class=postbody1><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: " Roman?; New ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Times Roman??><FONT face=华文新魏 color=#0066ff size=6>太有才了!!!</FONT></SPAN></SPAN></P>

开心每一天 发表于 2007-10-6 19:31

<P><SPAN class=postbody1><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: " Roman?? New ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; Times><FONT face=华文新魏 color=#cc3333 size=6>帆斑竹你太有才了!!</FONT></SPAN></SPAN></P>

大海的女儿 发表于 2007-10-7 11:50

<SPAN class=postbody1><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: ; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt" Roman?? New ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; Times><FONT face=华文新魏 color=#cc3333 size=6><P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 24pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 33pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.5"><SPAN class=postbody1><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: ; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt" Roman?? New ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; Times>“今年这是第三次了吧?记得不是很清楚。但是我喜欢在雨季看大海,我喜爱看雨滴坠落似大海的情景。每每看到雨滴滴落大海的时候,雨滴有千万种。梅花瓣状、金珠状,更像</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">千万个伞兵,从空中跳下来,安全地降落在地面上</SPAN><SPAN class=postbody1><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: " Roman?? New ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; Times>,也像</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">夜间星辰磷光捕鱼的大网,</SPAN><SPAN class=postbody1><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: ; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt" Roman?? New ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; Times>在触及浪花的那一瞬间,雨滴变成泡沫,带着一颗善良的心融入那翻腾的浪花中去,温柔和善的与浪花弹奏出优美的琴玄管合奏乐曲,与浪花一起吟唱欢乐歌声。雨滴是坠落的天使,是天上赐予人间万福,虽然雨滴很小,可她无私、全部的奉献,而我们每一个人</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=postbody1><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: red; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt">.......”</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: red; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt"><?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" /><o:p></o:p></SPAN></P><P><BR>冬泳人在一年四季游中都会遇到雨中畅游的机遇,每当这个时候或多或少都能感受到雨滴飘落在身上、水上的美妙。但象风帆斑竹这样富有诗意的把所见所闻的雨滴描写的如此美妙,真是令人敬仰!</FONT></SPAN></SPAN></P>

笨小鸭 发表于 2007-10-7 11:41

<P><FONT face=隶书 color=#a0a0a0 size=5>看文章就知道,作者定是一位生活的有心人,具有一颗多么细腻敏感的心!</FONT></P><P><FONT face=隶书 color=#a0a0a0 size=5>同一片天空,下着同样的雨,在斑竹的眼中,到了诗人的笔下,却变成了富有“灵性”的雨。</FONT></P><P><FONT face=隶书 color=#a0a0a0 size=5>相信能用心感受生活的人,一定也会拥有一份“诗意”的人生!</FONT></P>

北极熊 发表于 2007-10-7 14:04

呵呵,帆哥是诗精啊
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