傲雪寒梅 发表于 2007-7-21 18:32

[原创]“二月春风”轻拂江城

<SPAN id=yu><BR><P><FONT color=#040463 size=5>&nbsp;&nbsp; 仲夏艳阳高照天,<FONT face=宋体>忽闻贵客到江城</FONT>,要问他是哪一个,赠梅解鱼“培智”兄。</FONT></P><P><FONT color=#040463 size=5>&nbsp;&nbsp; 七月的吉林江城,迎来了久闻大名的“二月春风”老师。要见这位冬泳网里的才子,心里直打鼓,生怕我这一凡夫俗子说话有疏漏。</FONT></P><P><FONT color=#040463 size=5>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 百闻不如一见,一股军人的阳刚之气中又透着文人的儒雅气息。和蔼可亲的他是那样的风趣幽默,我一路的忐忑不安顿时烟消云散。</FONT></P><P><FONT size=5><FONT color=#040463>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 我们促膝谈心,谈生活,谈冬泳,谈我们冬泳网里交流的帖子。“闲鱼6699”妹妹也不错过她的拿手绝活,抓拍老师的每一个细节,哈哈!!这次会不会又有什么幽默搞笑被她抓住呢?</FONT><FONT color=#040463>不过,我也没错过这宝贵的时机,与“二月春风”老师合拍几张等会儿发给大家。</FONT></FONT></P><P><FONT color=#040463 size=5>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 遗憾的是,因为时间紧张,“二月春风”老师原要私访海螺屋的计划泡汤了,只有期待下次,有机会再来吉林市一同畅游美丽的松花江了。</FONT></P><P><FONT color=#040463 size=5>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 祝“二月春风”老师身体健康,有机会一定再来吉林江城。</FONT></P><P><BR></SPAN><BR>&nbsp;</P><P><FONT size=4><FONT color=#730431>采纳“二月春风”老师的建议,我把上面第二句换掉了(<FONT face=宋体>忽闻贵客到江城)谢谢老师给学生批改作业哦。还望今后多多指教。</FONT></FONT></FONT></P><br><br>[此帖子已被 傲雪寒梅 在 2007-7-29 18:17:54 编辑过]

傲雪寒梅 发表于 2007-7-21 18:33

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自由人 发表于 2007-7-21 18:53

<FONT face=隶书 color=#dd2222 size=6>“二月春风”老师吉林之行,微服私访,落落大方,潇洒自如,感觉挺好啊。</FONT>

傲雪寒梅 发表于 2007-7-21 18:32

<SPAN id=yu371283><BR><FONT color=#dd226d size=5>心情放松了许多<BR><IMG onmousewheel="return yuzi_img(event,this)" src="/attachments/Upfiles/2007721181816297.jpg" width=561 onload="javascript:if(this.width>body.clientHeight)this.width=body.clientHeight" border=0><BR><BR></FONT><BR></SPAN>

傲雪寒梅 发表于 2007-7-21 18:33

<SPAN id=yu371284><BR><FONT color=#ff0000 size=5>二月春风与闲鱼6699<BR><IMG onmousewheel="return yuzi_img(event,this)" src="/attachments/Upfiles/200772118191336.jpg" width=561 onload="javascript:if(this.width>body.clientHeight)this.width=body.clientHeight" border=0><BR><BR></FONT><BR></SPAN>

傲雪寒梅 发表于 2007-7-21 18:34

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傲雪寒梅 发表于 2007-7-21 18:34

<SPAN id=yu371288><BR><FONT color=#f73809 size=5>互相交流经验中....</FONT><BR><IMG onmousewheel="return yuzi_img(event,this)" src="/attachments/Upfiles/2007721182037789.jpg" width=561 onload="javascript:if(this.width>body.clientHeight)this.width=body.clientHeight" border=0><BR><BR><BR></SPAN>

傲雪寒梅 发表于 2007-7-21 18:32

<SPAN id=yu371281><BR><FONT color=#ee113d size=5>初次见面,忐忑不安中 嘿嘿!!<BR><IMG onmousewheel="return yuzi_img(event,this)" style="ZOOM: 90%" src="/attachments/Upfiles/200772118173505.jpg" width=561 onload="javascript:if(this.width>body.clientHeight)this.width=body.clientHeight" border=0><BR><BR></FONT><BR></SPAN>

傲雪寒梅 发表于 2007-7-21 18:33

<SPAN id=yu371286><BR><FONT color=#ee1111 size=5>闲鱼准备出击了 哈哈!!</FONT><BR><IMG onmousewheel="return yuzi_img(event,this)" src="/attachments/Upfiles/2007721181942496.jpg" width=561 onload="javascript:if(this.width>body.clientHeight)this.width=body.clientHeight" border=0><BR><BR><BR></SPAN>

闲鱼6699 发表于 2007-7-21 20:51

<FONT color=#f70968 size=6>二月春风老师真心欢迎你再来吉林市.</FONT>

白山龙 发表于 2007-7-22 13:15

<P><FONT size=5>寒梅报导的很有水准!昨天晚上下的早没看到!</FONT></P><P><FONT size=5>江老这次“微服”一定收获不小吧!我们几个今天早上还在等您向我们“汇报”呢!可是一直没见您的踪影!醉了?</FONT></P><P><FONT size=5>寒梅的落落大方一定给您留下了深刻的印象吧!</FONT></P><P><FONT size=5>这回见到闲鱼了有没有继续扒开再解呀?</FONT></P>

启明 发表于 2007-7-22 14:57

谈生活,谈冬泳,谈健康。

网怡然 发表于 2007-7-22 14:51

<P><FONT size=5>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 读了此帖心生极端羡慕,伴随着丝丝嫉妒,叹息自己没有这样的机缘。</FONT></P><P><FONT size=5>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 好一个二月春风,潇洒浪漫,谈笑风声,当年修铁路的大兵,今成靓丽美女的先生;在岗时呼风唤雨,退休了仍然威风;甘心俯首做晚辈的三陪,忙里偷闲去吉林私会女学生;观足球憋气尚为消尽,江城仙气缭绕松水奔腾,江兄陶铸其中。</FONT></P>

长白鹿 发表于 2007-7-23 10:11

<FONT face=黑体 color=#0000ff size=5>“二月春风”吉林之行,微服私访,没游松花江,一定遗憾。</FONT>

冰水清人 发表于 2007-7-23 15:10

<FONT size=5>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 好一个二月春风,潇洒浪漫,谈笑风声,当年修铁路的大兵,今成靓丽美女的先生;在岗时呼风唤雨,退休了仍然威风;甘心俯首做晚辈的三陪,忙里偷闲去吉林私会女学生;观足球憋气尚为消尽,江城仙气缭绕松水奔腾,江兄陶醉其中。</FONT>

初来乍到 发表于 2007-7-25 16:46

原文由 网怡然 发表: <br><P><FONT size=5>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 读了此帖心生极端羡慕,伴随着丝丝嫉妒,叹息自己没有这样的机缘。</FONT></P><P><FONT size=5>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 好一个二月春风,潇洒浪漫,谈笑风声,当年修铁路的大兵,今成靓丽美女的先生;在岗时呼风唤雨,退休了仍然威风;甘心俯首做晚辈的三陪,忙里偷闲去吉林私会女学生;观足球憋气尚为消尽,江城仙气缭绕松水奔腾,江兄陶铸其中。</FONT></P><IMG src="http://www.china-ws.org/BBS/Htmleditor/tounge_smile.gif"><IMG src="http://www.china-ws.org/BBS/Htmleditor/embaressed_smile.gif"><IMG src="http://www.china-ws.org/BBS/Htmleditor/omg_smile.gif">

长白游 发表于 2007-7-26 11:45

<P><FONT size=5>&nbsp;</FONT><FONT color=#ff00ff size=6><STRONG>&nbsp;&nbsp; 好一个二月春风,潇洒浪漫,谈笑风声,当年修铁路的大兵,今成靓丽美女的先生;在岗时呼风唤雨,退休了仍然威风;甘心俯首做晚辈的三陪,忙里偷闲去吉林私会女学生;观足球憋气尚为消尽,江城仙气缭绕松水奔腾,江兄陶铸其中。</STRONG></FONT></P><P><STRONG><FONT color=#3300ff size=6><EM>二月春风——长春冬泳的思想家、文学家!我们网友学习的榜样! </EM></FONT></STRONG></P>

山野村夫 发表于 2007-7-27 08:35

试试发帖。

山野村夫 发表于 2007-7-27 08:39

访海螺屋没去成,那是因为等他弟弟耽误了。

二月春风 发表于 2007-7-27 10:47

<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 对傲雪寒梅一帖的“批注”</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"><?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" /><o:p></o:p></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"><SPAN style="mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"">日前,傲雪寒梅曾发一帖:</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体">《</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"">二月春风轻拂江城</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体">》</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"">,一些网友有些回复。我几次</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"">浏览,现作如下批注:</SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt">1.</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"">题目中“轻拂”一词用得恰到好处,显示了寒梅女杰的文才;</SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt">2.</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"">开头四句小诗,文笔也不错。如把第二句改成“忽闻贵客到江城”,则</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"">更合辙押韵、文从字顺了;</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"><o:p></o:p></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 70pt; TEXT-INDENT: -70pt; mso-char-indent-count: -5.0"><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"><SPAN style="mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;</SPAN>3</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"">关于</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt">.</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"">网怡然回复中的几个词语,</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt">1</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"">)三陪:</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"">六岁外孙参加课外辅导,陪读;学打跆拳、乒乓等,陪练;吃零食、买零嘴,陪(赔)钱。</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt">2). </SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"">私会:有那贼心,没那贼胆哪!</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt">3).</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"">观球憋</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"><o:p></o:p></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 45.15pt; mso-para-margin-left: 4.3gd"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"">气:哀其不幸,怒其不争;说说而已,过后拉到。</SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 45.15pt; mso-para-margin-left: 4.3gd"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman""></SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt">4.</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"">冰雪清人及初来乍到也有回复,用官话说,人云亦云,亦步亦趋;俗话说,见样学样,长个葫芦瓢样。</SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 45.15pt; mso-para-margin-left: 4.3gd"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman""></SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"><SPAN style="mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;</SPAN>5.</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"">微服私访:原意是想像鬼子进村,悄悄的,打枪的不要。可是……</SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 45.15pt; mso-para-margin-left: 4.3gd"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman""></SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"><SPAN style="mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp; </SPAN>6.</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"">落落大方,潇洒自如:实际是匆忙而至,仓惶离去。</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"><o:p></o:p></SPAN></P>
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