长白游
发表于 2007-8-5 09:53
原文由 二月春风 发表: <BR><P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: " Roman?? New ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; Times> 对傲雪寒梅一帖的“批注”</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"><?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" /><o:p></o:p></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"><SPAN style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </SPAN></SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: " Roman?? New ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; Times>日前，傲雪寒梅曾发一帖：</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体">《</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: " Roman?? New ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; Times>二月春风轻拂江城</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体">》</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: " Roman?? New ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; Times>，一些网友有些回复。我几次</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: " Roman?? New ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; Times>浏览，现作如下批注：</SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: " Roman?? New ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; Times> </SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt">1.</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: " Roman?? New ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; Times>题目中“轻拂”一词用得恰到好处，显示了寒梅女杰的文才；</SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: " Roman?? New ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; Times> </SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt">2.</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: " Roman?? New ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; Times>开头四句小诗，文笔也不错。如把第二句改成“忽闻贵客到江城”，则</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: " Roman?? New ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; Times>更合辙押韵、文从字顺了；</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"><o:p></o:p></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 70pt; TEXT-INDENT: -70pt; mso-char-indent-count: -5.0"><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"><SPAN style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </SPAN>3</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: " Roman?? New ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; Times>关于</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt">.</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: " Roman?? New ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; Times>网怡然回复中的几个词语，</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt">1</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: " Roman?? New ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; Times>）三陪：</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: " Roman?? New ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; Times>六岁外孙参加课外辅导，陪读；学打跆拳、乒乓等，陪练；吃零食、买零嘴，陪（赔）钱。</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt">2). </SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: " Roman?? New ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; Times>私会：有那贼心，没那贼胆哪！</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt">3).</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: " Roman?? New ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; Times>观球憋</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"><o:p></o:p></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 45.15pt; mso-para-margin-left: 4.3gd"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: " Roman?? New ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; Times>气：哀其不幸，怒其不争；说说而已，过后拉到。</SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 45.15pt; mso-para-margin-left: 4.3gd"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: " Roman?? New ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; Times></SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt">4.</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: " Roman?? New ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; Times>冰雪清人及初来乍到也有回复，用官话说，人云亦云，亦步亦趋；俗话说，见样学样，长个葫芦瓢样。</SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 45.15pt; mso-para-margin-left: 4.3gd"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: " Roman?? New ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; Times></SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"><SPAN style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </SPAN>5.</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: " Roman?? New ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; Times>微服私访：原意是想像鬼子进村，悄悄的，打枪的不要。可是……</SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 45.15pt; mso-para-margin-left: 4.3gd"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: " Roman?? New ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; Times></SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"><SPAN style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </SPAN>6.</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: " Roman?? New ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; Times>落落大方，潇洒自如：实际是匆忙而至，仓惶离去。</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"><o:p></o:p></SPAN></P><P></P><P><FONT color=#ff00ff size=7><STRONG>才艺领教了，</STRONG></FONT></P><P><FONT color=#ff00ff size=7><STRONG>各位过谦了！</STRONG></FONT></P><br><br>［此帖子已被 长白游 在 2007-8-5 9:55:20 编辑过］
冬泳先锋
发表于 2007-8-7 15:27
让你们羡慕二月春风吉林行。
翻江鼠
发表于 2007-7-26 17:01
<STRONG><FONT color=#ff00ff size=6>好一个二月春风，潇洒浪漫，谈笑风声，当年修铁路的大兵，今成靓丽美女的先生；在岗时呼风唤雨，退休了仍然威风；甘心俯首做晚辈的三陪，忙里偷闲去吉林私会女学生；观足球憋气尚为消尽，江城仙气缭绕松水奔腾，江兄陶铸其中。</FONT></STRONG><P><FONT color=#3300ff size=6><EM><STRONG>二月春风——长春冬泳的思想家、文学家！我们网友学习的榜样！</STRONG></EM></FONT></P>